Storybound Editorial
Developmental Editing by Rachel Holloway
Welcome to Storybound Editorial!
Whether you are a published author or one still working on their first draft, I want to welcome you to Storybound Editorial. My name is Rachel Holloway, and my goal is to help authors make the story that they want to tell the best it can be. Writing is not easy. You pour blood, sweat, and tears into it, but also hopes and dreams. Not every author wants to be published; however, every author has a story (or two or three or ten) in their hearts just waiting to be put to paper.
Storybound Editorial is built on that idea. That not only is a story bound—locked—in an author’s mind, but a story is also bound—sure—to be told. A key part of human nature is creativity and art yet few things come into creation perfected. Writing is just the same. It takes work to learn the craft of writing, and that can be an intimidating task to even begin. The good news is that an author does not have to learn everything all on their own.
It’s not the job of an editor to simply correct but rather to guide. This is true for every level of editing, and it’s especially the case of developmental editing where the primary focus is the big picture. Every author has a unique voice, and the right editor will highlight that voice not squelch it. If you think I may be the right editor for you, please read more about me and my services then click “Contact” to fill out my inquiry form or send me an email at inquiry@storyboundeditorial.com.
Because creativity is intrinsic to human existence, generative AI has no place in creative spaces. Therefore, Storybound Editorial will not edit using any AI programs to the best of our ability nor will we work on a manuscript that had generative AI used in any part of the creative process. If you need assistance with your writing, please check out the Master Sheet of Compiled Writing Advice and Resources below.
Happy writing, friends!
“We never end up with the book we began writing. Characters twist it and turn it until they get the life that is perfect for them. A good writer won’t waste their time arguing with the characters they create...It is almost always a waste of time and people tend to stare when you do!”
Storybound Editorial’s Services
Scott Norton, a retired developmental editor from the University of California, wrote in his book that “developmental editing denotes significant structuring or restructuring of a manuscript’s discourse” (1). This involves taking the big picture elements, like characterization and plot structure, and analyzing them throughout the entire manuscript. A developmental edit does not focus on grammar, punctuation, or line-by-line issues like most other editing types. Rather, the feedback will focus on specific pieces of the story, like whether a character arc is successful or the timeline is cohesive.
At Storybound Editorial, feedback is split between in-line commentary and the editorial letter. In-line commentary is typically the immediate reaction of an editor as they are reading where the editorial letter is a culmination of all of their observances over the course of the edit. This feedback is always meant to strengthen both the author and the manuscript, and it can vary between questions, compliments, observations, and critiques.
The Diagnostic Edit
The starting point for any of my services that evaluates the first two chapters of your manuscript to provide a personalized quote and give an inside look into my editing style.
The Manuscript Evaluation
The happy medium that provides a base level of insight on your full manuscript’s plot structure, characterization, concept, prose, and immersion.
The Developmental Edit
The edit that takes a deep dive into the craft of fiction to give your manuscript the most thorough feedback, revision advice, and commentary.
Includes an outline built in Plottr©.
Testimonials
Looking for resources to help during your writing journey? I’ve compiled a list of helpful links, articles, books, and a plethora of social media posts. Links include websites for novel organization tools, name generators, free lectures, and even my slideshow of 100+ writing prompts. I’ve organized the books, articles, and posts into different categories of the craft of fiction—Characterization, Plot Structure, Description, Dialogue, Worldbuilding, etc.
Whether you’re new to writing or a seasoned author, please check it out!